Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, March 27, 2020
Where I want to go next in the world
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Cool slide Cailtin. Did you know I went to Sydney recently? I even had dinner at the top of that westfield tower in a restaurant that spins around so you can see the whole view! Did you know I makes websites for my job? Its a bit like making these slides. Anyway, a quick tip for you; if you are putting writing on top of a picture, put a white box behind the text so we can read it. Some of your pictures have lots of cool detail but it makes it hard to read the text you've put on it. If you put the text in a white box, we'll be able to see the picture and read the text. Keep posting, you're doing great work!
ReplyDeleteHey Caitlin, what a great presentation. I have been to Sydney, and you will love it when you get to go one day.When I went to Sydney there were fruit bats in the botanical gardens, right in the middle of the city. The locals thought they were a pest, but I thought they were super cool, it looked like hundreds of black handbags hanging from all of the trees! Have you started saving your pocket money so that it is your money you are spending there, not just Mum and Dad's?!
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Hey Caitlin, I am loving reading your blog posts - are you enjoying doing them? I have been to Sydney twice - both times when I was a younger girl. My favourite part was the zoo. Do you like Zoos? I look forward to seeing your next post xx Bex
ReplyDeleteFantastic work Caitlin. I love Sydney, especially all of the beaches. I wonder if you could find the names of some of the places you would like to go? For example what is the name of the zoo you would like to go to in Sydney? Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Caitlin
ReplyDeleteSydney is so much fun and I agree with Miss Smith that the beaches are amazing. Your slide show was so entertaining with lots of cool pictures. Well done, I hope that one day you get to go and see your favourite animal, the koala!
cool caitlin
ReplyDeletecool, I would like to there!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Caitlin
ReplyDeleteI loved all of those places
Next time you could try to make it easier to read
but other than that it is great keep up the great work
Emily
Hi Caitlin!
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to take you to Sydney! Its one of my most favorite cities in the whole world. Sadly I think due to this pandemic it might be a while before we get there. I agree with Alun about the white boxes, they will make it much easier to read the text. Keep up the great work.
Hi Caitlin!
ReplyDeleteamazing slide i love it